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灰色の色合い
02-18-2010, 12:08 AM (This post was last modified: 02-18-2010 12:11 AM by Mewthriii.)
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灰色の色合い
灰色の色合い(はいいろのいろあい)

Hairo no Iroai (English: Shades of Gray) is a manga series I am writing. It uses concepts from the Harry Potter series, but is designed to be the polar opposite of Harry Potter. It takes many themes and ideas from the anime "Soul Eater", as well as classic stories by Shakespeare and Edgar Allan Poe.

Shades of Gray tells the story of four former wizarding school students surviving on the streets of rough towns. The story starts in Los Angeles, where muggle-born wizarding school dropout Jackson Keane is fighting a muggle spook.

I have most of the story planned out. The current organization of the story progression will take up around 10 volumes (80 chapters).

Here are the character profiles as of the end of volume 1.

JACKSON KEANE
Age: 16
DoB: 08.26.93
DoD:
Notable Features: Distinguished by his use of a stopsign as a broomstick.
Magical Lineage: Muggle-Born
Familiar: None
Gang Affiliation: None
Magical Talents: Affinity for spell creation and adaptation.
Strengths: Muggle Fighting Styles
Weaknesses:
Relationships: Boyfriend of Janett Emmerson
Other Notes:

KATELYN REID
Age: 17
DoB: 05.03.92
DoD:
Notable Features: Seldom wears clothing above her waist; wears loose-cut blue jeans.
Magical Lineage: Unknown
Familiar: None
Gang Affiliation: None
Magical Talents: Affinity for Legilimency and Occlumency
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Relationships:
Other Notes: Purpose in this series is to make fun of fan services in anime by being possibly the smartest and sharpest character in the series.

JANETT EMMERSON
Age: 17
DoB: 02.29.92
DoD:
Notable Features: Black hair in front, but blonde (almost bleached) hair in back.
Magical Lineage: Half Blood
Familiar: Grimalkin
Gang Affiliation: None
Magical Talents: Animorphmagism (can become any animal at will).
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Relationships: Girlfriend of Jackson Keane
Other Notes:

GRIMALKIN
Age: N/A
DoB: N/A
DoD: N/A
Notable Features: All black except for a ring of white around it's neck
Magical Lineage: N/A
Familiar: N/A
Gang Affiliation: N/A
Magical Talents: Allows Janett Emmerson to use her power of animorphmagism.
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Relationships: Familiar of Janett Emmerson.
Other Notes: Named for a familiar in Shakespeare's 'MacBeth'. Resembles Pluto from Edgar Allan Poe's The Black Cat'.

MADDISON GRAY
Age: 19
DoB: Some time in 1986
DoD: Some time in 2005
Notable Features: Is a ghost.
Magical Lineage: Half-Blood
Familiar: None
Gang Affiliation: None
Magical Talents: Is a ghost.
Strengths: Cannot be harmed.
Weaknesses: Cannot Fight
Relationships: Taught Katelyn Reid about magic.
Other Notes: Died of an overdose on muggle halucinagens (namely PCP).


I will have character art and plot updates soon. Jamata!

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02-18-2010, 09:46 AM
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RE: 灰色の色合い
Wait... Does Katelyn Reid wear a bra or anything, or is she just topless? O_O

Other than that, it sounds pretty cool.

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02-18-2010, 11:45 PM (This post was last modified: 02-18-2010 11:47 PM by Mewthriii.)
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RE: 灰色の色合い
(02-18-2010 09:46 AM)Beefster Wrote:  Wait... Does Katelyn Reid wear a bra or anything, or is she just topless? O_O

Other than that, it sounds pretty cool.

She doesn't wear a bra, which makes it fun because I have to come up with new and interesting ways to keep it PG-13.

And because this would be frowned upon by most people who are not anime nerds, I use this to totally hate on fan services. Usually when there are fan services, if comes from a really spacey girl who is not terribly bright. In this series, Katelyn is debatably the smartest and most quick-witted character in the series which means anyone looking to enjoy fan services can find themselves conflicted.

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